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“This Romeo is bleeding, but you don't see his blood” - Bon Jovi - Always
This Romeo is bleeding but you don't see his blood, nor feel the pain throbbing through his heart. Brandishing love like a saber you slash your way through his dreams gutting his hopes. Oblivious of their cutting edge your words wound his injured pride and this Romeo bleeds silently; invisible in the shadow of your disdain. You steal his breath and his heart and yet, to you, he doesn't exist but like a moth, attracted by your light. Love metamorphoses into a smile fluttering at the fringes of his happiness until you swat it down, and it dies as a frown. Unbeknownst to you your soulmate's cries of despair get reduced to mere background noise, and you move on without him, like he wasn't there. (Free Verse) 02/17/2020

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Date: 2/23/2020 7:52:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/23/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/23/2020 6:08:00 AM
A deeply emotive spirit, you captured the effect of that line very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/23/2020 8:40:00 AM
Thanks S.O., I appreciate my placement and your support my friend, Emile.

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