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Without A Question

( Without A Question )

Your the one for me, its like pie without the crust
I love you without a question, like a desert without dust
I could never give you up, like a banana without its peel
You are the the missing piece, like a pump without its heel

Amazing smile and beauty, like a bird without its wings
I admire all about you, like an artist who never sings
Your the air in my lungs, like a fish without its water
Your truly amazing, like an icicle thats got hotter

Sensational beyond design, like a canvas without paint
So in love with you, like a heathen thats a saint
Your beautiful all over, like a church without a steeple
Continually amazing me, like a concert without people

In debt with you until the end, like a wallet without money
stunning is your eyes, like a clown that isnt funny
See without you I`d be miserable, like heartburn with indigestion
And without me you`d be the same, without a question

© Gregory Paul 11/13/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/18/2019 11:52:00 AM
Simply beautiful:)
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Gregory Paul
Date: 11/18/2019 3:31:00 PM
Ty Aditi
Date: 11/14/2019 12:31:00 PM
Gregory, So many wonderful similes! Which to choose, which to choose... Aw, heck! I'll take 'em all. Regards, Shawn
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Date: 11/14/2019 1:18:00 PM
thanks Shawn, glad you liked it
Date: 11/13/2019 7:16:00 PM
great expression of love... it seems to complete people... beautifully penned! :)
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Gregory Paul
Date: 11/13/2019 11:24:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I appreciate it
Date: 11/13/2019 1:45:00 PM
So many good lines in this I cannot pick out just one I liked the best. Wonderfully crafted my friend. This was great.
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Date: 11/13/2019 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Chris. I write about my wife daily. She is a huge inspiration to my poems
Date: 11/13/2019 4:58:00 AM
Loved the poem and especially this line: "So in love with you, like a heathen thats a saint"
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Date: 11/13/2019 3:28:00 PM
Thank you Caren. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for reading it.
Date: 11/13/2019 4:37:00 AM
like an artist who never sings... little confusing.. But I admire the poem, without a question..
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/13/2019 10:42:00 PM
Thanks Gregory.. I read it again.. Beautifully penned..
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Gregory Paul
Date: 11/13/2019 3:26:00 PM
Hi Jenish. In the begining of the poem I did all the withouts and in the end I did thats what life without my wife would be like without her. * Heartburn with Indigestion cause with her it life makes more sense. thanks for reading it. Hope I helped
Date: 11/13/2019 3:24:00 AM
Seeing you put your name at the end of this beautiful poem, I assume it is not for Laura's contest. I'm not much of a judge but I feel it would have been a great poem for the contest.
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Date: 11/13/2019 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Victor. I have entered a lot of contests. Not sure if I did for Laura. Thanks for taking the time to read it.