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Within His Eyes

WITHIN HIS EYES WITHIN the mirrors of his eyes, I find myself. HIS brown pool irises draw me in - EYES that hide me in his secret place, his and mine. I know his eyes intimately, our love making starts in them. I FIND light and life that lifts my soul, his LOVE beats strong in those doppelgänger great big browns. 10/10/2016 Brief Memories Contest/FJ Thomas

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Date: 10/13/2016 8:00:00 AM
A 7 for your lovely, descriptive poem, Kim! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2016 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Janice! :):)
Date: 10/12/2016 8:52:00 AM
So nice piece. Best wishes for Contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2016 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha!
Date: 10/11/2016 7:15:00 AM
Nicely crafted Kim. Their eyes say so much.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2016 7:20:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)
Date: 10/10/2016 8:55:00 AM
Very romantic, Kim. The eyes never lie!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2016 9:43:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel :)

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