With the Lord - the Atrina Style

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~With The Lord ~ ( Atrina ) Make all your dreams for you just shine Follow his guidance, you'll be fine His guidance follow, you'll be fine Make all your dreams for you just shine Make all your dreams come true and glow Enjoy life to fullest and grow Life enjoy to fullest and grow Make all your dreams come true and glow Thrive and keep thoughts positive, pure There's salvation with the Lord sure With the Lord there's salvation sure Thrive and keep thoughts positive, pure Make all your dreams for you just shine Follow His guidance, you'll be fine Make all your dreams come true and glow Enjoy life to fullest and grow Thrive and keep thoughts positive, pure There's salvation with the Lord sure. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2017 May.24.2017 So now faith, hope, and love abide, these three; but the greatest of these is love. 1 Corinthians 13:13 (NIV) -“For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life. John 3:16 (NIV) - Rejoice in hope, be patient in tribulation, be constant in prayer Romans 12: 12 ( NIV ) -The Lord will fight for you, and you have only to be silent.” Exodus 14: 13 ( NIV ) “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain ~Author's Notes: The " Atrina " is a poetry form or style that was created by Keith Metcalf Drew, and is a stanzaic poem of 18 lines, consisting of 3 quatrains and a sestet. With all lines counting 8 syllables. Rhymed: AaaA BbbB CccC AaBbCc The capital letters indicate refrain lines. (AaaABbbBCccCAaBbCc) The first and last lines in each verse are exactly the same. The third line in each verse is of same words to the second line The fourth verse the sestet consists of the first two lines from each of the three previous verses. ~ Thought for the day : - - Salvation can't be found in anyone or anything else. There's no other. Only Jesus. Only through Jesus alone.

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