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Winter's Grip

cold air, green buds spring is trying to arrive winter’s grip remains Heidi Sands 5/14/19

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Date: 5/23/2019 2:26:00 PM
Finally spring has sprung drawing summer on its apron strings. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my p age. Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/23/2019 2:28:00 PM
I like your comment. Thank you. It is still cool here, but we are beginning to see it . :)
Date: 5/21/2019 2:07:00 AM
At the end of this battle when spring finally comes, it enchants the landscape with beauty and joy... Salute dear poeta, alkas
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/21/2019 7:54:00 AM
Yes, that's true. Thank you for your wonderful comment :)
Date: 5/15/2019 5:54:00 AM
A battle of seasons, looks like winter is winning...Very nice haiku...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2019 7:29:00 AM
Yes winter is sure winning for sure for right now. Thank you :)
Date: 5/15/2019 3:26:00 AM
We gave it here first thing that coolness in the air, but it warms up mid morning. Nice hakiu Heidi. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2019 7:29:00 AM
I am glad you have the warmth coming about mid morning. We have had a lot of 30's and 40's , still waiting for spring. Thank you Tom :)
Date: 5/14/2019 9:05:00 PM
Indeed! You've captured the moment perfectly, Heidi. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2019 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Susan. I appreciate your visit and comment :)
Date: 5/14/2019 8:23:00 PM
You have portrayed Spring/Winters grip perfectly (and painfully, for these old bones, at least). :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2019 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Gershon, still waiting for spring here :)
Date: 5/14/2019 4:52:00 PM
It doesn't feel like it right now..but winter is on its way out.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/14/2019 4:55:00 PM
That's right. It will be here and I look forward to it. Thank you Vijay :)

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