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Winter Dreams

An early morning walk to work on sparkling silver frost - so cold, with random flakes of snow that landed, then were lost. I saw the gold and red of dawn in bands across the sky, but then I had to close the door (as always, with a sigh). I wondered if the snow would last; if icicles would form, and men would dig snowdrifts with spades... Inside the shop was warm! But when I left, the paths were clear; I felt the cold again. No winter wonderland for me: the snow had turned to rain! written 3rd December, for Shadow's Winter poem contest

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Date: 9/12/2017 8:00:00 PM
What a sweet winter write Jack. Well done with wonderful flow, rhythm and rhyme. The imagery was very lovely as well. I agree with you last two lines; I'm very disappointed when my winter wonderland's snow turns to rain as well! Lol! :)
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Date: 7/27/2017 7:48:00 PM
Nice jack, your name is very familiar to me...
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Date: 12/6/2016 11:25:00 AM
Yes, rain is depressing. Sounds like the kind of winter we're having so far up here in Michigan. Love, daver
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Date: 12/4/2016 4:59:00 PM
wow, I LOVE how you did this theme, Jack. HOw I miss you here. We need your kind of poetry more often. You just don't come here enough, my friend.
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Date: 12/3/2016 6:28:00 PM
Oh I much prefer the rain to the snow Jack so i loved the twist at the end of your poem!! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2016 4:36:00 PM
Ahh!! Sad that the snow turned to rain so that you could not go home and build a snowman or woman..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara..Reads like a winner to me..
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