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Winter Is Not Forever

Scrape, bye ; The Calendar ticks with no inky point, segments broken into whatever minuet, or waggle and slithers of whats left for you. You can gaze through, honey coombes yellow along a long one way troop of seedless sunflowers, their low heads hung, corroded and long Bee,d. Winter in broken boxes spilt, blind, even, warm to strangers Spring a season of Infinite meaning, Based, on nothing but the viewpoint of a Bee. 13/7/21

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Date: 2/19/2023 11:37:00 PM
Winter in the viewpoint of a Bee - is written beautifully. Congratulations!
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John Lusardi
Date: 2/20/2023 2:15:00 AM
Thank you for your comment
Date: 2/19/2023 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations John! Thank you for entering the 'Winter is not Forever' poetry contest!
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John Lusardi
Date: 2/19/2023 6:44:00 AM
Many thanks too you. Keep safe in these times of murky waters ??
Date: 8/17/2021 11:07:00 AM
An exceptional poem! Many notable images like "...seedless sunflowers low heads hung." Look forward to reading more of your fine postings. Cheers Brian
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Date: 8/6/2021 10:51:00 AM
Thank you all so much for your comments, i take them all as inspiration to keep trying to write constructively. Much appreciated thanks too you all. John.
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Date: 7/29/2021 4:53:00 PM
many congrats on your win John:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/29/2021 4:33:00 AM
Wonderful Word Play. Congratulations on your deserved win!
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Date: 7/29/2021 12:07:00 AM
Nicely done, with interesting word play. Congrats on your placement in the contest, John
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Date: 7/28/2021 3:48:00 PM
Very well done, John. So many creative references - "based, on nothing but the viewpoint." You have certainly engaged us with your words! Let me be the first to offer you congratulations for your win.
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Date: 7/28/2021 2:55:00 PM
Hey! Congratulations for your winning place in the Word Play Poems, Play-on-Words, Contest. Well Done. I loved your poem and really enjoyed reading it.I hope you enjoyed the writing challenge. Great fun indeed! Cheers and Best Wishes!
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