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At the beach in your bikini blowing off those also-rans you posture in your playful way with Gucci shades, the latest Grisham novel. At the gala you're exquisite in your tiny cocktail dress. Simple, black, short and sexy, you shimmer like a morning mist, the chandeliers are dancing in your eyes. Home in your flannel night dress, (the antithesis of sex), tucking in the kids and softly singing them to sleep, you're Wonder Woman, let me make you dinner! I want to scream: "The competition's done, we have a winner!"

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Date: 1/5/2009 12:17:00 AM
An inventive write Keith that holds the reader.Excellent.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/31/2008 2:39:00 PM
Wonderful title and nice tribute to the one you love. Love the ending!! This is a creative poem, a joy to read. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Keep up the good writing. Happy 2009! Karen
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Date: 12/31/2008 11:02:00 AM
Keith - Sounds like you have found your dream - Cherish it always - happy New year & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/31/2008 10:27:00 AM
Seems to me, you have found your dream woman, I love this, I admire the way you pay compliment to her everything....this is awesome, always, Christy
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Date: 12/31/2008 9:43:00 AM
Youve got a winner! The poem and your woman. BG
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Date: 12/31/2008 8:59:00 AM
I love the last stanza of this piece! Wonderful write, I loved the whole tone of this, and the language you used. Beautiful job, blessings, ~Michaela~
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