Wind

Wind wandered whispering when wondrously. . . Whoosh! “Wail,” went wind while whirling with wild whipping whines. March 11, 2019 for Joseph May's Light Up The Page 2 Poetry Contest

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/19/2019 11:44:00 AM

...and the sponsor as blown away by this one as i was, back with congratulations! xomo

Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2019 4:13:00 PM

This is an excellent double Lanterne, Andrea. Sound and movement take center stage! Congrats on placing first. Regards // paul

Charles Messina

Date: 3/18/2019 12:12:00 PM

Awesome, Andrea. Congratulations on your 1st place win :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/17/2019 8:39:00 AM

A perfect winner, Andrea, congratulations:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2019 8:33:00 AM

- Congratulations on your top winning poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2019 2:31:00 AM

This belongs at the top Andrea! Congratulations on your deserving first placement. This clever lanterne is going into my faves! Happy St. Patrick's Day my friend. I'm dealing with a cold right now. Hugs, Connie xxoo

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/17/2019 12:25:00 AM

Hi Andrea, I'm not suprised to see you in the top spot! Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 3/16/2019 6:13:00 PM

OO. AWESOME! I just get swept up by the wind in your poem and blown away! (Pun intended.)

Joseph May

Date: 3/16/2019 4:49:00 PM

I love a whispering wind...Congrats on your win Andrea..

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/16/2019 1:08:00 AM

WoW! Andrea, Great use of words that begin with " W". Good imagery and content. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 3/15/2019 4:43:00 PM

lol, wonderful use of the form its active and rather funny, too, enjoyed reading it, Andrea

Constance La France

Date: 3/13/2019 11:49:00 AM

Andrea, this is great, sure Joseph will love it ~

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/12/2019 10:03:00 AM

Wonderfully-written double Lanterne, Andrea! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/12/2019 6:49:00 AM

I like the onomatopoeia in this poem!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/12/2019 6:01:00 AM

Hip hip hooray! Good luck in the contest. A fun read.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/12/2019 3:22:00 AM

Excellent, only you could have done it with W, Andrea:)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/12/2019 1:26:00 AM

This is goooooooodddddddddd......

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/11/2019 4:54:00 PM

WOW, love it, so clever.

James Horn

Date: 3/11/2019 4:42:00 PM

While walloping waking whale withstood whipping winning warship which we were washing

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/11/2019 4:33:00 PM

Witty wonderful word wave! I wuv it! ;D sWeet! Good luck in the contest! xomo

James Horn

Date: 3/11/2019 4:30:00 PM

Have to write poems about food for a Food Poetry Recital in Shallotte, NC at Roark Library end of month of March. Slicing Enticing Cake Had started out when we were slicing, Incredible cake seeming so enticing; When found, Perfectly round, With excellent icing and sweet spicing. James Thesarious Hilarious Horn Retired Veteran RiverSea Plantation Bolivia, NC

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/11/2019 4:21:00 PM

A very active wind...lovely!

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/11/2019 4:01:00 PM

Bravo, Andrea. Superbly done.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/11/2019 4:49:00 PM

Actually, it was done wrong, LIne . I focused so much on all words being w that i forgot correct syllable count. Good thing I rememberd to redo it now.