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WILL THE WORLD ALLOW

WILL THE WORLD ALLOW If the world allows me to... I shall meet no one but you Gaze around and see yellow prance Blues there but they'll be gone That sunrise you have, it blew my mind. If the world allows me to, Will you let me wave by wave view? And voice by voice stars we do strew... Night and day may play a rocky circus ride Don't forget, I'm here to catch your slide If the world allows me to.. Let me share that magic within you Touching your heart not made of stone Brave me will pass whatever is in store. I shall stay with you longer than life If the world allows me to... ©O. E. Guillermo 11:34 pm, November 02, 2014

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Date: 11/9/2014 12:31:00 PM
You are a fighter, Olive_eloi; you are not one to give up or stumble at the first obstacle; you are positive and full of faith; surely the world would not be too hard on you!! hugs // paul
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Date: 11/10/2014 8:41:00 AM
I hope so Paul.. the world seems there to challenge me; bring me out to my limits; but well it's all worthwhile 'cause if not I could have not been me now.. :)! thanks much Paul ;)!
Date: 11/9/2014 8:54:00 AM
A mine treasured with love only. Beautifully done. Loved always, my friend,bl
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Date: 11/10/2014 8:42:00 AM
thanks much for stopping by. :)!
Date: 11/4/2014 7:31:00 AM
Beautiful as ever---pure poetry
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Date: 11/4/2014 6:52:00 PM
thanks much Sir Jerry.. :) God bless you..
Date: 11/3/2014 2:54:00 PM
Will the world allow as you enter into tomorrow. I'm sure hope it does for you, many smiles and never sorrows, James :)
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Date: 12/8/2014 7:50:00 AM
thanks JAmes.. :)!
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James Fraser
Date: 11/29/2014 5:08:00 PM
It's me I'm back to read and re-read this lovely piece, James :)x
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/4/2014 2:57:00 AM
Yes.. :) if there are sorrows, well I just hope I can surpass them as this the life.. :) it is reality we should all deal....
Date: 11/3/2014 10:10:00 AM
this is so very beautiful olive excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 11/4/2014 2:55:00 AM
Thanks much Liam.. :D always appreciate your drop by.:D
Date: 11/3/2014 6:49:00 AM
Lovely thots n a fabulous write dear Olive! Great work!
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Date: 11/3/2014 9:13:00 PM
Thanks much Dr. Upma.. :D I appreciate it.. :D
Date: 11/2/2014 1:58:00 PM
Very nice thoughts...I enjoyed your love, Yes, the world allows me...Best wishes to you from India...
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Date: 11/3/2014 9:07:00 PM
Thanks much Sandip.. :) I feel just lighthearted nowadays.. :D
Date: 11/2/2014 12:59:00 PM
Another great poem Olive! I think of that new song "wave after wave" slowly drifting. Great job!
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Date: 11/3/2014 9:06:00 PM
thanks much DAn.. :)! I appreciate this drop by.. :D!
Date: 11/2/2014 11:38:00 AM
- A heart open for LOVE! - Beautiful poem my friend Olive! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/2/2014 8:05:00 PM
Thanks much Anne Lise.. :) xoxo.. :D hugs much.. :D! my ever supportive friend.. :D!