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butterflies entice listless eyes, vibrant buds bloom, where wildflowers grow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/16/2021 7:40:00 AM
Very fine Haiku. Every spring I scatter wildflower seeds. Hence, I am especially partial to your lines here. Best wishes, Brian
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 1/16/2021 4:25:00 PM
I love wild flowers. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 1/16/2021 4:00:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 1/16/2021 5:56:00 AM
Thank you. :-)
Date: 1/15/2021 12:19:00 PM
Nice haiku Joanna. Congratulations on the HM! Linda
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 1/15/2021 4:12:00 PM
Thank you. :+)
Date: 1/15/2021 10:40:00 AM
Joanna thank you for entering my contest. If possible I will try to host another soon.
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 1/15/2021 4:11:00 PM
Sounds great, I'll look out for another contest. Thank you.
Date: 1/1/2021 4:16:00 AM
Ahhh!! I know with this scene in sight those listless will come alive. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 1/15/2021 4:11:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 12/21/2020 12:00:00 AM
Nicely composed. Blessings.
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/21/2020 12:46:00 AM
Thank you :-)
Date: 12/20/2020 11:52:00 AM
You have a knack for describing great beautiful moments, thank you for sharing Joanna
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/20/2020 12:12:00 PM
Your most welcome. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 12/15/2020 5:43:00 PM
Those 'listless eyes' sure are haunting, Joanna. :) gw
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/16/2020 12:20:00 AM
:-)

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