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I met George at a bar one night, it was a girls night out on the town; he was charming and so handsome, we had a wild whirlwind romance; then he was gone . . . The years passed, and then one day; I heard my name, and George was standing there smiling. I felt a stirring of feelings, once more, I was lost in the storm; he was charming and so handsome, but the old magic was dim; and this love lost and found, was lost again . . . _________________________ July 28, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Wild Whirlwind Romance Copyright Protected, ID 16-812-326-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, A Love Lost, Then Found, Only To Lose Again, sponsor, Brenda Chiri-Carroll Second Place

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Date: 8/26/2016 2:41:00 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your 2nd Place win! Well-done. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/26/2016 10:40:00 AM
BW, congrats on your amazing placement! well deserved lady! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/26/2016 8:58:00 AM
If only we could get a control over the heart...hmm Goodbyes so difficult :) Congrats on your 2nd place with these loving lines.
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Date: 8/26/2016 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance. Janice
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Date: 7/30/2016 12:43:00 AM
I love the ending! Succinct with a bam-bam ending - good write, and good luck in all things ... CayCay
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Date: 7/29/2016 9:53:00 PM
Now THAT is a whirlwind all right!Very well done, my sweet friend!!
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Date: 7/29/2016 1:44:00 PM
funny how passion can become a passing storm, to be so intimate yet know its time was just that, a moment when flames burn leaving embers and memories...good luck and thank you.. your poem brought back a memory
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Date: 7/29/2016 9:33:00 AM
Hi BW, This is a good entry for the contest. That is so sad to loose some one you love. Only to find out when they have returned they are still lost.Excellent job! Good luck in the contest. A big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/28/2016 9:06:00 PM
Love it!!!The Storm......
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Date: 7/28/2016 6:19:00 PM
Gosh he sure created a storm Constance! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/28/2016 6:04:00 PM
This is a whirlwind romance alright! It's always exciting to meet up with them again, but somehow it's never quite the same.... well done, Constance!
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