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im feeling done pushing forty nothing i want of no majority mind making no sense thoughts scatter why, common sense whats the matter thinking is too much desires are not goals no such live, I rather not nobody listens nor seems to care an unknown season becoming hard to bare a mess feeling kinda out there dont know the meaning in this moment here

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Date: 4/27/2013 2:51:00 AM
Well what we do is keep on.Nice piece of poetry.Gidds
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Date: 3/21/2011 9:20:00 AM
Huge emotional cluster here...ahhh the cons of love. It's only gonna make you stronger. Strong lines. Well done.
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:19:00 AM
This captures a real disorienting feel, there's no logic, just splattered emotional resonance
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