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Why Cant I Just Dye Already?!

I wanna slice my throat Make me believe that you loved me when you didnt This isnt fair when I havent loved in soo long I wanna take this rope and hang it from a tree And let myself hang from it I am Done with This messed Up life!

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John Loving Iii

Date: 5/16/2009 8:26:00 AM

when you grow up and have a daughter JUST like you, then you'll want to die. because nothing you do makes her happy! your truly ungreatfull. and i'm totally bored by it. do it by your self.

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/13/2009 6:04:00 AM

I think you could very well, and very easily take this further and make it into a beautiful,, soul sick, broken hearted, piece of art. Please think about contuining it. Angel Rose

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/12/2009 11:32:00 AM

Ah strong emotions and strong actions as well! Well done I felt all your frustration! Laura :) Peace!