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Whitney 2 - Destiny

Destiny Carries its dreams Encased in Crumpled leather Awaiting Fate’s trembling touch Old hands clutching a promise 9/5/2017 submitted to WHITNEY 2 – Poetry Contest

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James Inman

Date: 9/27/2017 8:54:00 AM

An excellent write John, very touching.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2017 10:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, John, Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/11/2017 6:12:00 PM

Congrats!!! John on your fine placement...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/11/2017 6:07:00 PM

Very nice, John! Congrats,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2017 5:35:00 PM

Excellent verse on this picture theme, JOhn. BIG congrats

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/11/2017 2:26:00 PM

Nice one John. Congratulations :)

Jack Webster

Date: 9/11/2017 12:14:00 PM

oooh! this is so nice. it has me hooked. i want more! i hope you'll use this as a beginning for a longer poem!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/11/2017 12:13:00 PM

Many congratulations John I love your take on the contest theme:-) many congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2017 10:39:00 AM

ok john, you got me hooked on your flowing, touching images... sweet congrats for your winning slot and thanks for supporting this contest.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2017 6:11:00 PM

wow, this is amazing. I have seen only one other that is this good (and it was not mine. haha)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 9/6/2017 11:40:00 AM

This is gorgeous! Good luck!