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Whitney 2 - Pack

Pack hurdles Sad memories Bad notions Worst tendencies in a bag, Lock it firmly, throw the key into the sea Sep-5-2017 For Whitney 2 Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud

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Date: 9/6/2017 7:13:00 PM
Yes I like that, deep in the ocean :) best of luck Supraja :)
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Date: 9/6/2017 5:58:00 PM
Love how you looked at this theme and did the contest!! Great metaphor.
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Date: 9/6/2017 1:44:00 PM
I agree with you, Supraja...getting rid of that baggage can open the way for a brighter future. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/5/2017 12:20:00 PM
Good luck in the contest my friend. You have penned a beautiful poem.
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