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The breezes at dawn have secrets to tell you Come close, it’s not yet time to say adieu Hear their whispers in the weeping willow trees I can hear melodies drifting through the leaves If we listen carefully we will hear them say Your love means more to me every single day Jan Allison 25th July 2015 Complete the Lines Contest – Sponsor Nette Onclaud Inspiration - Line 7 - Rumi

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James Fraser

Date: 8/28/2015 4:23:00 PM

Simply delightful to read, wow it is, and it's no surprise that it's won ~ hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2015 4:27:00 PM

I was really pleased to place with this one James - I'm not that great at romantic writes but was really happy with this one:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2015 8:40:00 PM

a very sweet and romantic one, Jan. I am not sure I even saw this before, maybe it's because you added the picture later? Anyway, So glad you are on the winner's list. BIG congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2015 12:00:00 AM

The image was always there - maybe I posted a couple of poems this day and this one sneaked through - so glad you enjoyed it:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/5/2015 1:05:00 AM

ohh, huge congrats on your sweet, melodic win, jan... thanks for being part of my contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2015 2:41:00 AM

Thanks Nette, it was a lovely challenge you set for us:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/4/2015 12:37:00 PM

Congrats on your winning write, Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2015 12:43:00 PM

Thanks so much Laura:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tammy Reams

Date: 8/4/2015 8:41:00 AM

This is a fantastic write Jan! I have to read this to my hubby! Congrats on your win--7 from me!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2015 9:42:00 AM

aww hope he enjoys it too Tammy:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/4/2015 8:32:00 AM

A most lovely poem, Jan. Weeping willow trees is where secrets are usually kept. Njeri heard each line whisper....now that you've won they must be shouting with joy:) ~ Big congratulations! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2015 9:42:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Paul :-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 8/4/2015 5:30:00 AM

Very romantic Jan...Congrats on a fine win

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2015 5:35:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/4/2015 12:49:00 AM

Congrats on ur winning awesome write Jan! Wonderful imagery!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2015 3:06:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 8/4/2015 12:43:00 AM

Jan, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2015 3:06:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 8/3/2015 9:22:00 PM

Jan, congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2015 3:05:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/3/2015 11:54:00 AM

Back to congratulate you, Jan! hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2015 12:24:00 PM

Oh thanks Kim I didn't realise it had been judged:-) hugs jan xx Just back from my radio interview - will let you know when it is broadcast:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/27/2015 8:24:00 AM

Jan, love the romantic-melacholic appeal, good flow and imagery of this poem!!! :D Lover and Friens is my first ever collaboration and this the spark that ignited Paul and me= friendship.. :D its a rush and a battle against time.. :D~Olive Eloisa and hugs!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 9:47:00 AM

Thanks Olive:-) there are some very special people here on soup and we are blessed to have them in our lives:-) :-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/26/2015 11:04:00 PM

Dear Editor: I found a wonderful poem, this in no poop, its a real big scoop, why this poem is so great it belongs on Soup!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 1:50:00 AM

Thanks my friend:-) :-) Hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/26/2015 7:25:00 PM

Dave is correct, this is a happy poem, well done..good luck in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 1:49:00 AM

Thanks Frederic:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/26/2015 10:10:00 AM

Hello Jan!! Good Luck in the contest with your poem here. Each verse is quite smooth and reads very well. (I like verses 3, 4, and 6 in particular.) And thanks too for commenting on my recent Clerihew write!! A "7"!! Best Always, Gary

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 10:12:00 AM

Thanks Gary I'm not very confident with romantic writes but this flowed really well - i just hope Nette likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/26/2015 9:59:00 AM

Another winner here, Jan. Awesome 3rd and 4th lines. Way to go, Jan! hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 10:08:00 AM

Thanks Kim - I hope Nette likes it too:-) hugs jan xx