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Whispers In the Night

From the depths of her soul She hears the lyrics roar Biting whispers in her ears As creatures shudder Smeared dark with coal Demons lurking in the fog She takes him into confidence In the palm of his hand He holds her beating heart Clinging to his every breath While cold winds whirl In silence stirring AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on May 28, 2019 for CONTEST 600 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on May 17, 2019

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Date: 6/4/2019 3:12:00 PM
Great poem great win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2019 3:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/31/2019 11:05:00 AM
Cold and shivery, dark and foreboding, and all the time seductive. What great irony on such a subtle and penetrating obsession!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/31/2019 2:33:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Lonna.
Date: 5/30/2019 10:45:00 PM
The emotional intensity of your gripping poem is well expressed, Line. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2019 10:46:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/30/2019 2:59:00 PM
Ah, so lovely, Line!:-) Enjoyed. Heartiest congrats on your top win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2019 10:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Edward. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/17/2019 7:58:00 PM
I like the way you bring us up and down in this poem, scaring us, and loving us at the same time, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/17/2019 9:09:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 5/17/2019 1:26:00 PM
- A deep and great poems, Line - // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/17/2019 1:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunshine. Your visit and comment are most appreciated.

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