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Seven-Ten
Created by Emile J. Pinet in 2018, (Seven-Ten), (must be centered). There should be a distinctive pattern. Do not use blank spaces to create shape, use words. A non rhyme, twenty two line verse poem with (190 Syllables)- 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 

When the sun is shining bright we feel its warmth on our skin. And somehow we suddenly feel at peace, with worries unconsciously put on pause our sensitive side preserves the moment. Breathing in a breath of air reminds us that we're alive. Life is too short; we should pay attention as it tugs heartstrings with a gentle hand and shares the subtle splendors of nature. Forget fate's complexities they get simpler over time. Think back to the innocence of childhood when youth was an unexplored adventure, and we looked forward to everything new. When a songbird sweetly sings, its tune triggers love's response. Crushed by the weight of reality's world, we allot no time for life's simpler things, yet death can instantly cut our stay short. We've only one life to live, best we live it while we can. (Seven-Ten) 03/21/2020

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Date: 3/23/2020 2:41:00 PM
Great wisdom with advice in this special First Place winning poem Emile. Congratulations! Stay safe. xxoo
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Date: 3/23/2020 3:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/23/2020 11:02:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your top win. So many lovely phrases and images woven into your poem.
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Date: 3/23/2020 3:35:00 PM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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