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Where Can I Flee

WHERE CAN I FLEE? In last phase hazy Sun not to blaze. Dull sky to gaze, none to blame or praise. Life static stagnant without glamour or glee. Knowledge gathered so far seems useless. Lone sailor on voyage in vain, sailing aimless. Emptiness encircling me, where can I flee? 06/17/18 'When line SIX is a perfect FIX' Contest by Silent One

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Date: 6/23/2018 8:42:00 PM
Congratulations ,Anisha, on a great win.. great imagery . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/22/2018 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this six line poem of being lost. Well done!
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Date: 6/21/2018 4:08:00 PM
I hope you find your heart's desire, Anisha. A deep beautifully expressed poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/20/2018 6:47:00 PM
- A skilled and great 6 line poem, from you Anisiha :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne -Lise :)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/26/2018 12:05:00 AM
Thanks n Love
Date: 6/20/2018 3:59:00 PM
I hope you found your sanctuary Anisha..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/26/2018 12:05:00 AM
Thanks S.O. to appreciate. Blessing

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