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Where Are You

Where are you my love? I can't feel you Nor see you My heart is empty And I long for your touch It feels like I’m fading away It's though I don't exist Because there's no me, Without you my love Come to me I want, To find shelter in your embrace I want to rest upon your chest You are my sun rise And my heart’s song Without you I will certainly flatline Save me my darling 2-28-17 Alexis Y.

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Date: 3/7/2017 1:04:00 AM
The glamour has left the protagonist in the poem. But love can shine again, believe me. Very sad and romantic, I like this, Kai
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Date: 3/6/2017 4:52:00 PM
Romantic in a touching way, mostly because of the sense of longing and loneliness that flows through it, Alexis. Pleased to notice that you're posting again:) ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:22:00 PM
What a beautiful heartfelt write. I loved this, my dear. The sincerity in the lines warms the heart.
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Date: 3/5/2017 5:43:00 PM
Very romantic yearning, Alexis. I feel like that a lot w/the person I adore being so far away. Very poignant poem. A 7+! Love has no limit.
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Date: 3/1/2017 8:19:00 AM
Brilliantly romantic dear, Alexis! A huge seven!
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Date: 2/28/2017 11:21:00 PM
Sending the lifesavers whats your favorite flavor!!! :) Loved this!
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Date: 2/28/2017 9:28:00 PM
That hits the spot, Alexis. : )
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Date: 2/28/2017 9:13:00 PM
Lovely piece Alexis, I've missed you and your work,,,
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Date: 2/28/2017 6:44:00 PM
Well, look who found her pen again. :) This was deeply longing my friend, the emotions are strong in this piece. Really nicely done Alexis. We've missed your poetry around here.
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Date: 2/28/2017 5:34:00 PM
beautiful poem of longing Alexis
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