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When Will Humanity Speak of Unity

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I was inspired by several soupers on the soup that wrote on this subject.

Everywhere I look all I see chaos People fighting for an unclear reason When will we stand as a unified people? Why must we dwell on our differences? When will humanity speak ? I kept looking for beauty everywhere It was then when I almost abandoned my search, I noticed little children from all nations,they were playing and loving one another freely, it was then that I saw true beauty and it captured my weary soul It gave me hope that humanity will reign 11-18-16 Alexis Y.

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/11/2016 1:22:00 PM

I hope it does happens soon, before it gets too late. You stated the cause very well.

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/11/2016 1:27:00 PM

Hi Afzal, Thanks for such a thoughtful comment. I hope it happens soon too. I appreciate your support: -) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/18/2016 12:28:00 PM

If we all see what you see and the children perceive then the day will come for us to live in peace dear, Alexis! Glorious subject wonderfully written!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/18/2016 12:28:00 PM

If we all see what you see and the children perceive then the day will come for us to live in peace dear, Alexis! Glorious subject wonderfully written!

Chris Green

Date: 11/18/2016 12:12:00 PM

The two itys we'd all love to see come together. Humanity and unity. It seems so simple, doesn't it. Just being nice to one another would be a great start. Nicely expressed my sweet friend. Now if only we could get all of humanity to read this poem.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/18/2016 11:51:00 AM

That was a beautiful vision in one's mind, this poem was, Alexis. Sadly, I agree w/Lin. Until the Lord make a new heaven and earth, this bitter earth will cause us to cry unrelenting. Love the structure of this poem, how the thoughts are marshaled. Good write. Love always to you.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/18/2016 11:01:00 AM

Sometimes we need to let the children lead so we can see...lovely Alexis

Paloma P

Date: 11/18/2016 10:49:00 AM

Well spoken Alexis, I hear you and AMEN to that!

Lin Lane

Date: 11/18/2016 10:14:00 AM

Man cannot rule himself, Alexis. As imperfect beings, thanks to Adam and Eve, we will continue to wreak havoc on one another and the earth until God has had enough. Nice to see you and read your verse.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/18/2016 10:23:00 AM

Hi Lin, It's nice to see you. I appreciate your words of wisdom:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/18/2016 9:01:00 AM

- Never lose hope, Alexis ... children can paint peace, we adults do not care enough ... we have forgotten to be a child - For love : a 7 - Best wishes for a peaceful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) ... and dreams, my last poem :)