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When In Love's Immense Depths, You Are Truly Cherished

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My dear friend, again I have been honored and blessed to have the gift of composing this tale of love and its magnificent blessings with you!
My short poem fragment(first stanza)based upon a relationship I had over four decades ago, has been beautifully completed in our collaboration, because of your wonderful verses, inspiration, and immense talent.
Even beyond our friendship, you have further honored me with your great kindness and your truly generous gift of writing with me...
For all of that my dear friend, I am so deeply indebted...

Susan's note:

  Thank you my friend, for sharing your friendship and the joy of this write with me! Again, you lead the way with your splendid talent and abundant inspiration you so freely give. Your generous gifts light up my imagination and your beautiful lead stanza set the stage for a creative and poetic experience that made our collaboration most satisfying. Sharing concepts and creating our work together feels quite natural to me. I truly appreciate your deep and tender artistry, Robert, and also your patience for the delays caused by my busy-ness in these hectic days...

When In Love's Immense Depths, You Are Truly Cherished Mystical web spun memories of our sweet nights, love began under stars and brightest of moonlights. Hold onto that image, its joyous dreaming dreams; fiery echoes, night trysts and pleasurable screams! Love's greatest truth rests in thy bosom and kind heart, destined to meet that night and our souls never part! Fate fulfilled as we were thrilled, luscious love’s first blush, time together, had forever, no need to rush. Aroused desires stirred passions’ afire to burn like pulsing embers in joined flames of wanton yearn, till what was left, spent afterglow like cooling coal our hot bed then our sanctuary soul to soul. From passion's soul to soul, came steaming heart to heart, delicious love made each night glowing as fine art. Waking wrapped in love-joined joy, within Cupid's shot, giving you my all and all I have ever got. Days spent in loving arms that held our love so true, knowing your soft heart lives in me and all I do. From that day, when angels’ wings whispered you away, tears I cry are sweet relief when my mind does stray. Bleeding heart still blooms for you vibrant on the vine, though seeking tendrils ache without you to entwine. Oh the wish to taste your kiss, nectar ‘pon my lips, your thrilling touch still lingers since your life’s eclipse. Yet Fate had its saddest call, that none can deny, ours was to live its love-feast and not reason why. Now so alone, precious memories to sustain, moments of mirth that alleviate the great pain, feed my desires for your tender nightly embrace, know, no power ever known, can our love erase. Upon dawn's breaking, wake knowing you were once here, another memory lessens days flow of tears. Future promise of being joined in nightly bliss and in that moment having all I now so miss; your heart the flower, I the honey seeking bee, our love entwined in paradise under love's tree. Come take me to your Heaven's home of pearly light, my sombre soul now needs you like the stars need night. I look to skies bittersweet shades of twilight blue and daydream of your denim eyes of darkest hue. For a time imagining I’m held in your gaze your magic’s purest charms still don’t fail to amaze. Please find my kiss I’ve blown to you upon the breeze, I send to you my love with prayers while on my knees. Praying to be with you rather sooner than late, memories move to close the circle of our fate. Gather my soul, lift me to you like a feather, with spun gossamer of sacred ties that tether. Robert Lindley and Susan Ashley (a collaboration) _______________June 13, 2018_______________ My poet’s note: My dear friend, again I have been honored and blessed to have the gift of composing this tale of love and its magnificent blessings with you! My short poem fragment(first stanza)based upon a relationship I had over four decades ago, has been beautifully completed in our collaboration, because of your wonderful verses, inspiration, and immense talent. Even beyond our friendship, you have further honored me with your great kindness and your truly generous gift of writing with me... For all of that my dear friend, I am so deeply indebted... Susan's poet’s note: Thank you my friend, for sharing your friendship and the joy of this write with me! Again, you lead the way with your splendid talent and abundant inspiration you so freely give. Your generous gifts light up my imagination and your beautiful lead stanza set the stage for a creative and poetic experience that made our collaboration most satisfying. Sharing concepts and creating our work together feels quite natural to me. I truly appreciate your deep and tender artistry, Robert, and also your patience for the delays caused by my busy-ness in these hectic days...

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Date: 6/14/2018 4:14:00 PM
Brilliant pairing, my two talented friends, well done...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/15/2018 5:23:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I am indeed quite blessed to have such a fine friend and immensely talented writing partner!
Date: 6/14/2018 11:42:00 AM
Wow.. What an absolutely fantastic collaboration by both of you.. So many amazing lines and flow to this great poem..
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2018 12:31:00 PM
Thank you my very good friend. High praise indeed coming from you... My writing partner surely inspires me to improve my usual fare..
Date: 6/14/2018 9:33:00 AM
Very nicely done, you two!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2018 10:52:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Susan and I both had great joy in creating this tale of Love, its great Depths and Life that unfolds in myriads of ways.
Date: 6/14/2018 6:44:00 AM
Beautifully written. Congratulations to the both of you for this outstanding poem! :)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2018 10:50:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Very pleased you find it so. With Susan as my beautiful and very talented writing partner I find ways to up game...
Date: 6/14/2018 2:10:00 AM
A beautiful romantic collaboration you both have composed so well. Tom.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2018 10:47:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Susan inspires me to try to keep up with her shining talent...
Date: 6/13/2018 11:26:00 PM
What a wonderful poem and great collaboration. So romantic. Just amazing!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/19/2018 12:01:00 PM
Thank you my friend. It was a great pleasure to write with my very good friend Susan and thus be so inspired by her awesome talent...
Date: 6/13/2018 8:53:00 PM
My dear friend Robert, thank you again for making it such a joyful and fulfilling experience to write with you. I truly appreciate your gifts of tender artistry and poetic emotional depth that you so generously and kindly share with me. It is a delight, a privilege and an honor to be your writing partner. Your poetic heart and soul are held in my highest admiration my wonderful friend.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/19/2018 1:08:00 PM
Oh such a beautiful reply.. thank you for such glorious verse, 'Gabriel's horn', so exquisite my inspired friend!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2018 10:42:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. Always an honor and great joy to write with you. Your artistry amazes me and inspires me to improve my forty-nine year journey(since age 15) in writing poetry. Sweeter the new morn, in radiant light, even when hearts are torn, hope shineth' bright, tho' weak we are born, we've God given light, Gabriel's horn tells us, our course twas' right.

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