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When I Was Young

When I was young long time ago wished to soar in limitless sky, edge of effort I didn’t know, I had promise to keep and try. Committed to climb lofty peak when I was young long time ago, attain success and make fame quick before senility could grow. Wanted to be in limelight glow, took expectation to great height, when I was young long time ago I pledged to acquire what I might. Promises I couldn’t fulfill Yet I let life happily flow, a cascading stream down the hill when I was young long time ago.

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Date: 10/12/2017 1:21:00 AM
what a beutiful images you paint in your poem :) It's lovely.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/12/2017 1:27:00 AM
Thank you, Darren for visiting and appreciating the poem.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/12/2017 1:27:00 AM
Thank you, Darren for visiting and appreciating the poem.

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