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When I Let My Mind Out To Play

When I Let My Mind Out To Play There are blue crystal skies and amber butterflies, A breeze whispers to lapping waters, and they sing; They sing sweet melodies of their own, their tiny beaches Lined with jeweled blossoms, When I let my mind out to play. The crystal skies turn midnight blue, Diamonds twinkle by a yellow glass moon, Violins play lullabies to rustling angel wings, And you are by my side, When I let my mind out to play.

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Date: 11/2/2016 1:34:00 PM
This midnight serenity is enough for a reader to enter into a world of imagination.
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Date: 10/28/2016 2:47:00 PM
Lovely imagery throughout. Enjoyable read. To answer you question about my Lion poem. No double or hidden meaning, just commonsense – all meat that's eaten by humans is first killed (dead), unless one likes his meat raw. Thanks for the stop by. Best to you. / M
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Date: 10/25/2016 9:53:00 PM
Beautiful colors to share, well done Sunlite...
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Date: 10/24/2016 7:45:00 AM
I love it when you let your mind out to play, Sunlite. Pretty cool:):)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/24/2016 5:00:00 PM
Thank you for that comment.
Date: 10/24/2016 3:41:00 AM
Your vivid imagination is a wondrous place to play. Soothing imagery. :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/24/2016 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Paloma.
Date: 10/23/2016 7:22:00 PM
You should always let your mind out to play! Nice one!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/24/2016 5:02:00 PM
I'm thinking about writing a "When I Let My Mind Out To Play" series reflecting different moods.
Date: 10/23/2016 6:51:00 PM
aww, it is super cool prettyness when you let your mind out to play :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/24/2016 5:03:00 PM
Thank you - that was sweet.
Date: 10/23/2016 6:46:00 PM
gosh what a wonderful poem you sure let your imagination go wild Sunlite:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/24/2016 4:59:00 PM
Thank you so much.

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