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When Fireflies Dance Their Way

When fireflies dance their way through soft raindrops Enjoying gorgeous kaleidoscopic rainbow Their fey hearts smile with knowing joy Uniting their angelic essence with twilight elves Enjoying gorgeous kaleidoscopic rainbow Twirling with enthusiasm served up by a goddess Uniting their angelic essence with twilight elves They bathe in heavenly showers of ecstasy Twirling with enthusiasm served up by a goddess Their fey hearts smile with knowing joy They bathe in heavenly showers of ecstasy When fireflies dance their way through soft raindrops

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 5/27/2020 12:24:00 PM

Beautiful poem full of joy and rainbow color.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/27/2020 10:16:00 PM

Thank you Frances. I do adore pantoums; they are fun to write!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/23/2020 7:35:00 PM

When I think if fireflies I think of my youth and the awe of early evening, well written dear poet friend, winning wishes are being sent, and a prayer for healthy xo

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/23/2020 9:56:00 PM

I have to tell you I am sheltering in place but I still get to watch the fireflies!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 5/23/2020 9:36:00 AM

Caren, this works so perfectly as a pantoum...just love the story and your imagination here!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/23/2020 4:15:00 PM

Thank you Jeanne. I had fun with this contest! Entered it once before I saw the "approved themes", and then entered it again. Now I LOVE writing pantoums, so Eve may have created a monster.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/23/2020 8:46:00 AM

what charming imagery Caren, I've never tried an unrhymed pantoum poem, this is very sweet indeed:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/23/2020 4:15:00 PM

Thank you Jan. I do enjoy a pantoum. They are FUN! You need to try it!