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What Will Tomorrow Bring? Tomorrow’s in the hands of God, quite capable. I wouldn’t try to handle it myself. I pray that I will still be kind and lovable. The world will not just stick me on a shelf. I wouldn’t try to handle it myself. Living at my age is so precarious. The world will not just stick me on a shelf. I sometimes think tomorrow is perilous. Living at my age is so precarious. The times we live in move much too fast. I sometimes think tomorrow is perilous, considering the good days of the past. The times we live in move much too fast. I pray that I will still be kind and lovable. Considering the good days of the past, tomorrow’s in the hands of God, quite capable. 6/19/17 Pantoum Form: What will tomorrow bring - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 7/4/2017 8:21:00 PM
I love the inspirational message, Janis, thank you for entering my contest, congratulations on your win ~*
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/5/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thanks for the challenge with a pantoum. It was my first.
Date: 6/23/2017 11:30:00 PM
Now, this is a beautiful pantoum, Janis and so very true:)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/25/2017 1:10:00 PM
Thanks, Jo.
Date: 6/19/2017 8:05:00 PM
Tough form, done very well Janis, best wishes in the contest...
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/19/2017 11:39:00 PM
Thanks Charlie.
Date: 6/19/2017 4:16:00 PM
Smooth and coherent! You have obviously done this form before, Janis! Loved it
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/19/2017 11:41:00 PM
I have done one similar, a villanell

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