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What I'Ve Been Given

As the snow melts slow In the sunlight’s sparkling glow I recall when everything disappeared Consumed by all I feared So sudden, you were gone away No time for what I had to say Loving words hanging on my tongue The next song would have been sung That year, it was a cold winter With all the pain that did splinter My heart into pieces broken Only words at a grave spoken These memories never do fade Lingering in shadows of shade Although, I know you are in the light That shines upon me day and night What we had stays in a treasure chest To hold onto the very best What I’ve been given cannot be lost Through every winter that begins with frost Heidi Sands 2/27/18

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Date: 3/5/2018 9:56:00 AM
It s a really beautiful and heartfelt write especially the last two stanzas, I love reading it
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/5/2018 10:45:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment on this Faraz. I am happy you liked it :)
Date: 3/3/2018 11:51:00 AM
There are no words to describe the loss of a loved one. The hole always remains. As time goes on your right we can be thankful for what we were given. Beautiful writing.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/3/2018 1:03:00 PM
That is so true Bette. Yes, we must be thankful for the time we were given. I appreciate your kind comment :) Have a nice day!
Date: 3/1/2018 7:22:00 AM
Treasured memories...A heartfelt write Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/1/2018 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 2/28/2018 12:58:00 PM
If this is from personal experience, I am so sorry. I surely agree with the light shining day and night, we never completely lose those we love. A very beautiful poem, Heidi xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/28/2018 1:15:00 PM
Yes. Thank you for your kind, caring, comment Mike. I am grateful for your support. Happy Wednesday :)
Date: 2/28/2018 12:06:00 PM
I love the last line (and the rhyme) Nice! Kurt
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/28/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Kurt. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 2/28/2018 8:59:00 AM
Life is like snow, beautiful until someone tramples all over it... loved your poem...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/28/2018 9:03:00 AM
I am happy you liked this Silent One. Yes, snow can be trampled on and get very dirty too! Have a nice day. :)
Date: 2/28/2018 5:05:00 AM
Good one too...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/28/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thanks so much Arturo :)

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