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Farther than mantles of a pewter night, Comets reel in their own immeasurable world Past earth's sky, gloaming through lattices Woven by celestial bands... a grandeur From a multiverse illumined with other heavenly forms Like asteroids unknown to human eyes, mirrored Only in a roulette of divine Infinity : Out there, With the bursting spiral from gas, fire, molten rocks Twirls a dreamy carouse within a hub of Life Source. My heart aches to greet them beyond zone's limit In star-studded cast of aureoles...a poetry in motion, Which alights into Borealis songs, their haunting lore. And through sacred Mystery , I connect with this force Designed by one Galactic handiwork-- moons, stars planets circling around Milky Way, ever vibrant... And my heart pulses with them, my heart pulses. Then to bestow a natural pace of night and day, Season upon season, I see myself as one With creation reaching ---out for God's light. ............... Re-post 6/28/2019 Contest of John Hamilton: Best Free Verse 2019 Originally written 2/20/2019

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Date: 6/29/2019 8:08:00 PM
Wow Nette this truly is so beautiful! Loved it! Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 6/29/2019 7:48:00 PM
Wonderful write Nette, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:15:00 PM
- You see everything that is beautiful with your poetic eye, Nette :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2019 10:59:00 AM
Perfect! am always talking to friends re- our place in the universe, you have expressed such in your inimitable style, Nette! Beautiful!
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:07:00 AM
Wondrous imagery; best of luck in the contest; it should do well.
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Date: 2/21/2019 1:30:00 AM
Very tranquil and relaxing! :)
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Date: 2/20/2019 3:16:00 PM
Very nice Nette. This just took me away pleasantly :)
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