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What Goes Up, Must Come Down

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bouncing pouncing jumping up down keen somersaults on trampoline enthusiasm giggles out doing big brother’s errs bouncing higher higher like jumping beans what goes up must come down what the hack flip, lull …. plop flop flat on his back turns head over heels in air landing on her feet with flair this is the way you do it with knack 3/6/2016

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Date: 3/15/2016 12:38:00 PM
The accolade this piece deserves is a glory that stands in its own class. Great write friend and please continue to share your magnificent piece
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Date: 3/15/2016 12:24:00 AM
Eve, Congrats on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/9/2016 12:50:00 AM
Wonderful poetry here Eve.. congrats on big win.
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:08:00 PM
Such a cute take on the contest. Very flamboyant and full of life, and I enjoyed your use of spacing. Fitting for the trampoline. Before my nephews moved to Guatemala we used to play Dead Man, Dead Man, on the trampoline ... brings back memories.
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Date: 3/8/2016 10:17:00 AM
Unique take on sibling rivalry, Eve. It sounds almost like a memory. Nice write.
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:34:00 AM
Your writing has such a fun flair of its own!
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Date: 3/7/2016 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I like how you did this.
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Date: 3/7/2016 6:54:00 PM
Love your take on the theme, Eve. Congratulations on your nice win in the 'what goes up, must come down' contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:52:00 PM
Wow Eve, how clever and creative! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *Smiles*
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:43:00 AM
The picture does it all for me.....good write, Eve!
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:00:00 AM
made me smile Eve - great entry for the contest:-) good luck, hugs Jan xx
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