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I am the Antiope of Canada, Amazonian, but not breast less, Snowy bosom like virginal gems, Swelling lips moderately full, Savoury odor felt all around, Crystalline throat striking the eyes. Meandering, churning, darting, dashing, Transformed from blonde to brunette. Here alluring, benign, attenuated, There corpulent, colossal, capering, Practicing calisthenics all the time. Raquel Welch in ‘One Million Years B.C.’ Wily Cleopatra, the Scythian of Ordzhonikidze, Carnal Marilyn, matured Helen of Troy, Venus in Aries, Mars in Pisces. Broad bellied, middle-aged, deep, Now bulging belle of Detroit, Encircling the wooing Windsor, Yet the Blithe spirit of Pelee Island.
============================== March 15, 2014 Dr. Ram Mehta Form: Free Verse Eighth Place Win Contest What Am I by PD I have used: Personification,Alliteration, Hyperbole, simile, metaphor and synecdoche :

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Date: 3/17/2014 7:36:00 AM
the most wonderful piece ...you are a master... an idol!! ..Congratulations, Dr. Mehta!!! ^__^
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Date: 3/16/2014 5:58:00 PM
Wonderful piece from a talented poet..Congrats on your win...
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Date: 3/15/2014 9:27:00 PM
hi Ram congrats on win hugs
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Date: 3/15/2014 7:09:00 PM
A very though provoking read Dr Ram, congratulations on the win...I am intrigued to know the answer...H
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Date: 3/15/2014 2:17:00 PM
Hi Dr. , Congratulations, in the "What AM I" contest... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/15/2014 1:21:00 PM
Dr Ram , CONGRATULATIONS!! Sending you a big hug, I had so much fun reading every entry. I have a blog "What did you say about me???" Hopefully, you stop by when you have time, and reveal the answer. Tell US here or on my blog. WAHT! WHAT! And WHO YOU ARE? Always and Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 8/23/2010 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Jewels of the Crown". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2010 3:16:00 PM
A lot of the entries said they used personification, but I didn't see any. In yours, it is magnificent. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/21/2010 7:09:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in Debbie;'s contest with this brilliant write.. enjoy my friend.. ciao..luv..
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Date: 8/18/2010 6:09:00 PM
Dr. Ram, If you get a chance, please checkout my Doctor Phobia quickie contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/18/2010 8:53:00 AM
Wonderful Dr. Ram! Very unique. I really enjoyed your last two stanza twists.
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Date: 8/17/2010 7:21:00 PM
WHEW, what robert said! and I would not even attempt all this , Dr. Ram. I can't write free verse for the life of me. Very interesting how you covered so many of her elements. Good luck, my friend. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/17/2010 7:12:00 PM
Whew! That is excellent Dr.... Great free verse and education at the same time. Thanks for sharing and looks like a winner to me!
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Date: 8/17/2010 2:03:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...Reads like a sure winner...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing.. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that..Sara
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Date: 8/17/2010 1:34:00 PM
Enjoyed your personified interpretation of the great Niagara, Dr. Ram. You had me laughing a lot in the last two verses. Very good! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/17/2010 1:23:00 PM
well done....TAH
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Date: 8/17/2010 6:45:00 AM
Interesting outlook to one of nature's wonder! Good luck in the contest. And thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.
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Date: 8/17/2010 6:38:00 AM
this is wonderful! Thanks for your comment on my recent post, appreciated as always! Carol
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