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Wet Leaves

he fears winter ice while out walking in the fall~ shoe slips on wet leaves 11/9/2020 Contest: Sen-ru ( rather than hi-ku) Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Peter Dome

Date: 12/25/2020 9:59:00 AM

Very clever and so visual. well done. Pete.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/25/2020 1:43:00 PM

Thank you!

Jack Horne

Date: 11/18/2020 12:45:00 PM

you've painted a lovely picture here

Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/25/2020 1:43:00 PM

Thank you!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/17/2020 11:14:00 AM

A fall's fall! Those wet leaves are such pests:( That's how I got hernia many years ago! ~ Regards // paul

Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/25/2020 1:43:00 PM

Oh no, thank you for your visit!

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/17/2020 9:19:00 AM

I know that feeling. Great poem, Tania

Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/25/2020 1:42:00 PM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2020 4:38:00 PM

yikes! A good reason to fear it. It is awful how your life can change in one instant. Last month my dog lurched me with his leash and I fell on my back but it was my left hand that got hurt. even now it's not quite as strong as it used to be.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/16/2020 2:39:00 AM

Oh no Andrea! Thanks for your visit.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/11/2020 2:25:00 PM

They are lethal, have come a cropper many times, roll on spring lol. Tom

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/11/2020 2:26:00 PM

Ha ha, thanks for your visit Tom!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/10/2020 1:54:00 AM

That's destiny. ~~

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/10/2020 4:16:00 AM

Thanks Victor! hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/9/2020 4:25:00 PM

I've had that happen more than once, Tania! Great theme for the contest. Sending you best wishes for the contest!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/9/2020 4:26:00 PM

Thank you Sam!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/9/2020 10:57:00 AM

Pratfalls on leaves are better for seniors than on ice! Aloha! Rico

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/9/2020 10:59:00 AM

Thanks Rico!

Silent One

Date: 11/9/2020 7:12:00 AM

I am getting sick of soggy leaves lol.. I have a big field with very big ancient trees in front of my house, so the paths are full of soggy leaves! Not stopped raining for a few days here... Great senryu.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/9/2020 11:00:00 AM

Thank you SO, I almost fell recently on wet leaves and it was my inspiration for my poem. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/9/2020 5:45:00 AM

Hello Tania Kitchin, leaves are slippery when wet. I don't good on ice. Enjoy your day my friend. Thank you for the laughter.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/11/2020 10:38:00 AM

Hello Tania, have a nice day my friend. I have enjoyed this poem.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/9/2020 4:11:00 PM

Thank you Darlene!