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Welcome Winter Jq

Fall breeze, a soothing goodbye kiss on amber leaves filled sky. Entrancing they fall, descend round and round last final bend. Goodbye, fall, welcome winter sky. Sun grimace at bitter descend for longer night hold, bend to the grim winter cold. 3/8/2019 Poetry Contest: Jueju-Qijue With A Twist Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/12/2019 3:21:00 AM

An inspiring poem, Eve:) sure to be a winner:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2019 12:50:00 PM

I am reading what you wrote Dear Heart. What an incredibly hard winter it has been for many people. This poem sure gets that point across!

Constance La France

Date: 3/10/2019 11:19:00 AM

Eve, great poem , I am so ready for Spring here in Canada, today it is snowing again all day, sigh!

Eve Roper
Date: 3/10/2019 12:12:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Heart. The weather has made a change here the past week, from 36 to 80 it is incredible. :) .. Hugs Eve ~`*

Judy Ball

Date: 3/9/2019 2:25:00 PM

Love this Eve. Here in Alberta the Winter is long and has been very cold. We are ready for Spring. Great job here. God Bless, JB

Eve Roper
Date: 3/10/2019 12:13:00 PM

Thank you, Judy, for your encouragement :) .. Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/9/2019 12:16:00 AM

Ah, Eve, your imagery is lovely and your metaphors so sagely wise. "Sun grimace at bitter decend for longer night hold." Wow!

Eve Roper
Date: 3/10/2019 12:14:00 PM

Thank you, Caren, for your constant inspiration and encouragement :) .. Hugs Eve ~`*