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Welcome Fall

I loved you Summer but it is time for goodbye, your sweet beautiful flowers are decaying; it is only days until they just fall and die, once they were under the bright sun swaying; now, most of them are on the sad brown grass laying. The trees do not want to remove their emerald gowns, but, I ask them to show their pretty Fall shades; and slowly they let their leaves change with frowns, as the days pass their green just fades, and down, down red, orange and yellow cascades. ________________________ September 21, 2018 Poetry/Quintain/Welcome Fall Copyright Protected, ID 18-1063-911-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 11/9/2018 2:12:00 PM
Thank you ML, Viv, Ralph, and Chris for visiting and for your comments on my poem ~
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Date: 11/8/2018 9:18:00 PM
A beautiful write DH...and well sculpted too :) Have a great day :)
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Date: 9/23/2018 9:26:00 AM
You can probably describe the other seasons just as well. My compliments , Dear Heart!
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Date: 9/22/2018 1:43:00 AM
A fine work in process, Constance, and a good standalone piece, too. Viv x
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Date: 9/21/2018 6:07:00 PM
An excellent depiction of the leaves of Fall. I can hardly wait to read the rest.
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