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Welcome, Carol

Welcome, Carol So glad to meet you Carol Brown Please grab a coffee and come sit down Being new to Poetry Soup, you have made me feel so welcome Your genuine comments and inspiring creativity make me feel at home Oh look at that table, there’s Rick and Debbie And over in the corner are John and Catie Our host, Michael, is off in the distance In a deep discussion with our rambling poet, Constance Every seat is taken all around Carolyn With Francine, Deb, Rick, and Joyce all having fun By: Shani Fassbender For the contest: First Words Over Coffee

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Shani Fassbender

Date: 4/9/2011 1:59:00 PM

Thanks everyone...sorry Dana, wish we would've been allowed more than five couplets so I could have included everyone ;-)

Dana Smith

Date: 4/9/2011 11:58:00 AM

Wonderful read this afternoon. Looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn. P.S you forgot me :P

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/6/2011 5:23:00 AM

My heart you fill with joy Shani thank you. I love how you wrote this up for the contest. The mention of so many wonderful poets in your poem is marvelous. Wouldn't this be grand to see and meet so many of our poetry friends at the same place at the same time? You did an exceptional job of writing this poem and I wish you the best in the contest and always. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2011 10:00:00 PM

Cool how you incorporated other names into the poem. Carol is a lovely person you chose! LUv, Andrea

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 4/5/2011 6:47:00 PM

A wonderful entry for the contest. I enjoyed the read. Best of luck. Caryl