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Weeping

Let me tell you a sad story, a true story . . . In another time, under the dictatorship of Adolf Hitler and the Nazi Party, millions deemed undesirable were murdered, including children, imprisoned in Nazi concentration camps and extermination camps or were shot, or hanged. The first exterminations of prisoners took place in the month of September, 1941. Those not killed in the gas chambers died of starvation, forced labor, disease, self inflicted death, and medical experiments. Prisoners were forced to staff the gas chambers. After they were dead the bodies were burned in ovens or tossed into pits like garbage. They had stripped them of their clothes, stripped them of all dignity. Piles of shoes, clothing, eyeglasses, suitcases even baby things taken. Today those things are in museums to honor forever the millions of dead. Hundreds of Germans staffed the camps but only 12% have been convicted of war crimes. Auschwitz was liberated on January 27, 1945 but most of the population had been evacuated and sent on a death march. All this, was in another time. Hopefully the world has learned from this horrific time in history. Black and white pictures of unimaginable scenes are witness to what happened during the years 1933 to 1945. But the scenes I see on the news seem that the world has not learned the lesson well and leave me weeping and weeping for those who suffer. I saw an image of a women with children- death their destiny ____________________________ July 14, 2016 Poetry/Narrative/Senryu/Weeping Still Copyright Protected, ID 16-808-673-07-14 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Any Poem Written in 2016 sponsor, Laura Loo Third Place

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Date: 8/17/2016 8:41:00 PM
Love the narrative, B. W. A sad topic, indeed! Congrats....
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Date: 8/17/2016 7:01:00 PM
So sad so horrifying to admit n bear. Moved n touched on your narration.
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Date: 8/17/2016 3:49:00 PM
Another worthy win with this narrative of a horrific time in history! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/17/2016 1:48:00 PM
Broken Wings, oh my word, talk about pulling at heart strings! This was so touchingly sad yet beautiful at the same time...congrats lady on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/16/2016 6:17:00 PM
An extremely powerful poem of depth vision. i too agree with you that the world has not learned yet from the history. My favorite too. A great 7 and good luck my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/15/2016 9:01:00 AM
A very powerful write based on that historical horrific truth of 'in another time', Constance. This will be a top winner, I'm sure! Best wishes. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 7/15/2016 10:05:00 AM
Sandra, there are so many horrific happenings in human history but this one for me will forever haunt, well we never know what sponsors are wanting, this could be trashed, but I am still happy I wrote it ~
Date: 7/14/2016 9:11:00 PM
Broken Wings, the world has not learned it's lesson but it is writes such as this that can keep the eyes open to what once was and hopefully can be prevented from ever happening again!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/15/2016 10:11:00 AM
Walter, you are right, although the images are hard to look at and the history hard to read, we must so we never forget what Hitler called, The Final Solution~
Date: 7/14/2016 6:33:00 PM
I see you found a subject to write about, you chose one of the most painful times in our history..thank you for reminding, as time passes people tend to forget, this we should never forget...
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Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2016 6:54:00 PM
Frederick, I just started to think about the most horrible thing in another time, there are many, but this one, oh it was so awful, and so I wrote of it ~
Date: 7/14/2016 2:47:00 PM
- Auschwitz Concentration Camp a terrible place with cruel history in the walls - May their souls rest in peace - Let people behind the scenes burn in hell - Today's world is not getting any better .... just different - A powerful writing that makes me sad, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2016 3:07:00 PM
Sunshine, you are right, it is a terrible part of history, all those millions of people, it makes me so sad, treating people like garbage to be thrown away ~
Date: 7/14/2016 5:08:00 AM
Constance, a deserved 7 for this piece. Oh God! the little shoes. Your Senryu wonderfully encapsulates your prose. One thing I love about history is that WE do have the power to change it, sadly as your prose states we are NOT! peace and love, jill
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Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2016 3:12:00 PM
Jill, at least as poets we can write of the horror, try to make people see what hate creates, not that we can change what is happening still in this world of ours ~
Date: 7/14/2016 1:57:00 AM
What a horrible time! What a wonderful Senryu! A seven.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2016 3:13:00 PM
Dem, oh the images and stories are so heartbreaking, it made it difficult to write this poem, but it happened and must not be forgotten ~
Date: 7/14/2016 12:12:00 AM
so cute;)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2016 3:06:00 PM
The shoe is cute for sure.. but what is sad is the baby was put in a gas chamber and then burned in an oven...
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 7/14/2016 12:46:00 AM
The picture you have posted..shoe of a little one in the mighty hands;) That itself had lot to explain Broken wings...
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Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2016 12:37:00 AM
Cute ?

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