Wedding Day

Wedding Day Perfect extravagance your wedding day, There, anticipation gathered around. Petals strewn to decorate, true love found. The path to tomorrows before you lay… You walk today joyfully, unafraid Your love, of many years has made two strong. Together you can face one or a throng. Beautiful bride thy virtue walks arrayed. Upon forever, hopes and dreams are laid. The “Wedding March” has sung to you today. Your groom waits, loves light shall forever stay. Blessed be the oaths, promises this day made. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 27, 2010 Poetic form: Epithalamium Want to see the bride and her mother (me)? follow this link to my Poetry Soup Blog photos http://poetrysoup.com/poetry_blog/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=4830&PoetID=14403

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James Fraser

Date: 1/30/2010 5:23:00 AM

Another joy to read Dane Ann, wedding days are wonderful days >> James

John Freeman

Date: 1/28/2010 5:07:00 PM

This Epithalamium has magnitude. I like the ryming pattern. Sincerely, Moses

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 1/27/2010 5:32:00 PM

This is worthy of a top flight Hallmark card or a printed wedding toast. This is really good. You should be proud of this as it is a tight, challenging form. Thank you for kind remarks. Regards, Gerard.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/27/2010 3:56:00 PM

Wow! Dane Ann Smith-Johnson!!! This is absolutely beautiful! This would make a beautiful wedding gift in a nice frame!! Goes to my favs. Thank you for your always kind comments on my poems! Peace and love, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2010 10:48:00 AM

Beautiful write about that special day that we all enjoyed and looked forward to. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara