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We Name Storms and Storms Name Us -

Vain, strutting peacocks, assuming we are bequeathed the right to exist For Deb's contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 6:05:00 PM

Tim,, congrats..with your poem... pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2012 11:44:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Tim. I sure remember this profound senryu.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/8/2012 3:45:00 PM

yes human beings are..aren't we! for foolish the 'dominion of man' bah! humbug! Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2012 3:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done Tim - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/8/2012 11:39:00 AM

Wow, good description of the human race. congrats on your win..BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/8/2012 8:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2012 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Tim. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2012 11:32:00 PM

tim, I have no soupmails or member area, and I can't post poems or comments to blogs. Is it the same for you? I just noticed this coming back here after 11 p.m but I can see a few people have the ability to do blogs still. Did you send me another soupmail since the last one I responded to this afternoon? If so, could you just give me the message in a comment box of one of my old poems. thanks so much. Luv, andrea

Kathryn Collins

Date: 11/5/2012 4:58:00 PM

the rain reigns.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/4/2012 7:20:00 AM

a different kind of reflective 'ku, tim... sounds uniquely modern to me.. sail on!..:) huggs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/4/2012 6:54:00 AM

Comes from actually believing man is bequeathed dominion [we believe our own press LOL] this is 1 thought, 1 gramatical phrase it must be a visual or sensory fact to be a haiku this is a subjective statement..[meaning your opinion aye? mine TOO..but still unless you are really writing about a peacock you saw you have left haiku-land ;) entering free Verse land ] Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/4/2012 12:05:00 AM

Hi Tim, a very interesting entry... good luck and good night...pd

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/3/2012 8:21:00 PM

Nice, Tim! Jimbo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/3/2012 4:45:00 PM

True and well written Tim. - Luck in contest - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)