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Deadly Light

flickering lantern swinging gently in the breeze in the glow of the moonlight flitting fireflies are lured ~ towards the fatal attraction 22.05.20 Weaving A Wayra Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud syllables : 57768

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/23/2020 6:04:00 PM

True words...fireflies are doomed as soon as they approach the lantern. Nevertheless we always find them flickering around light. Congratulations on your win Wendy :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/23/2020 5:34:00 AM

ohh, that fatal attraction...congrats on your well-deserved win my contest, wendy...huggs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/22/2020 9:26:00 PM

Loved this one Wendy, congrats on your win. Hope you're well Tom

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/22/2020 12:17:00 PM

Such a tranquil scene till that fatal last line...wonderful element of surprise, Wendy! Best of luck in the contest :) xx Rhonda