Waves

When I think of you my heart smiles bright When I look at you I fall in love again When I hold you my soul flutter’s Seven waves come and go From small to big they drown me so Save me my lifeguard my heart

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Becca Teagan

Date: 3/2/2018 11:12:00 PM

Beautiful waves of love in this :) Thank you, Niall, for visiting my poems lately, it's so sweet of you.

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/3/2018 4:20:00 AM

Hi Becca , thank you Becca for lovely comment ::)))) hugs

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/17/2017 3:52:00 PM

you have me melting all over my chair. You are filled with love for some one and I celebrate this fact.

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/17/2017 6:39:00 PM

Hi Patricia , glad you enjoyed my friend :))))))))))))))) hugs , peace and lots of smiles :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/17/2017 1:33:00 PM

Awww, Niall, your gentle rhymes kiss the poetic shores of life. Such a tender, sweet, beauty of a write my friend! Very much enjoyed your poem this Sunday afternoon. I hope it's wonderful where you are :)))))))

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/17/2017 2:30:00 PM

Hi Susan , your comment is soooo sweet thank you so much glad you enjoyed a tiny weeeeny bit of my soul ::))))))))) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/17/2017 11:46:00 AM

- So sweet and beautiful, Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/17/2017 11:53:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , thank you , I hope your having a lovely Sunday my friend ,,,TLC ::)))) hugs

John Fleming

Date: 9/17/2017 9:47:00 AM

A nice little poem, Niall! Breaks gently upon one...like rolling waves rolling gently over. My very best regards this Autumnal afternoon! :) john

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/17/2017 9:51:00 AM

Hi John , nice to meet , thank you for comment , looking forward to reading some of your writes ::)))

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/17/2017 9:26:00 AM

Very nice to read today Niall :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/17/2017 9:30:00 AM

Hi Heidi , thank you for comment glad you enjoyed ::))) hugs

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/17/2017 8:32:00 AM

This is beautiful! I just love the sentimental feel of this poem! It would be something I would give to my wife! I surely loved reading your illustrious piece this morning! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/17/2017 9:19:00 AM

Hi Russell , nice to meet , thank you for your comment , have a lovely day looking forward to reading some of your writes :))

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/17/2017 8:32:00 AM

Darling piece, you make me smile so Niall :) xomo!

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/17/2017 9:21:00 AM

Hi Maureen , thank you Maureen , my mission in life is to make others smile ::))))))))) hugs