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A waterfall cascades From Yosemite’s breast In all its elegance And rage… floats spilling out This pageantry of awe. Enclosed by red-stones Swoosh of melody Grants holy respite , From a jaded world Dancing with chaste grass Pearled tresses blaze Lit by moonshine; To quench a thirst Dipped like ice cone Each journey Walks on grace-- As soul enters Fountain rippling… WAVES! Any Theme Diminished Hexaverse Sponsor: Charlie messina ~ Yosemite- 4 syllables~ 1/23/2019

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Date: 1/28/2019 7:55:00 AM
Beautifully written nettle, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2019 12:03:00 AM
Congrats! Ang ganda-ganda! Thanks for sharing your talent! Ang galing-galing!!! God bless you.
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Date: 1/27/2019 3:07:00 PM
beautiful and a well deserved top win, Nette.
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Date: 1/27/2019 9:38:00 AM
WoW! Nette, You painted such a lovely picture with words! It's no wonder you are in the top spot. Congratulations. It was most definitely well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/27/2019 9:02:00 AM
Well deserved 1st place win for this gem. Congratulations, Nette. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Date: 1/27/2019 7:46:00 AM
Beautifully written with great imagery, Nette. Congratulations on you top win with this gem! Great job on this form!Hugs Charlie :)
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Date: 1/26/2019 8:11:00 AM
I'm loving your poetry in 2019...
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Date: 1/23/2019 11:12:00 PM
A skilful write, well done!
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Date: 1/23/2019 10:43:00 PM
Nice write, Nette, very visual and appealing.
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Date: 1/23/2019 8:38:00 PM
Nice nature poem - good luck in the contest. I have entered an Israeli contest with a $500 first prize - hope springs eternal! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:32:00 PM
That's wonderful Nette you brought the picture to life my friend.
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:28:00 PM
Its really breathtaking isn't it, lovely form too, good luck in the contest Nette, hugs
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Date: 1/23/2019 6:54:00 PM
Such fresh, potent turns of phrases --- 'elegance and rage,' 'dancing with chaste grass.' Beautiful imagery, nette! :) gw
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Date: 1/23/2019 5:32:00 PM
This is gorgeous and so well written. A favorite for me! Well done Nette. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 1/23/2019 3:58:00 PM
That photo is so awesome --so is your poem, nette..Yosemite is such a charming place.
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