Waters

Rancid waters Won’t keep, Running waters Never sleep, Shallow waters Seldom deep Salty waters Often weep. Written May 18, 2022

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Date: 5/29/2022 11:14:00 AM

Nice flow to this Light Verse, Milt. I liked it. Bill

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/29/2022 12:05:00 PM

Thanks, Bill.

Date: 5/20/2022 4:21:00 AM

Milton, I love this poem….so well written! Debx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/20/2022 7:59:00 AM

Thank you, Deb.

Date: 5/19/2022 4:05:00 AM

Until this poem I had never considered all of the different types of waters; this poem has inspired me.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/19/2022 8:12:00 AM

Wonderful. I am pleased, Caren. I'm sure there are many more, too. You know, "still waters run deep!"

Date: 5/19/2022 1:29:00 AM

You captured the flow of waters well Milton. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/19/2022 8:12:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. I was just dilly-dallying!