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Water Views

I like the kind of water view Where I can see the shore, With lots of possibilities To visit or explore. I gaze at buildings, trees and parks And wonder what it’s like To live there or just spend some time To wander ‘round or hike. No matter if I’m on a boat Or sitting on the land, The river helps me to relax In ways I understand. However, on an ocean cruise, With water all around, I feel uneasy, knowing that I’m far from solid ground. What many may find calming In a vista oh, so vast, Has the opposite effect on me, ‘Til I see land at last.

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Date: 4/24/2023 10:37:00 AM
After seeing the Titanic movie, I will never be in this boat (pun intended) " However, on an ocean cruise, With water all around, I feel uneasy, knowing that I’m far from solid ground."
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Date: 4/9/2023 6:51:00 PM
Me, too!! Keep land in sight, I say! :) gw
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Date: 4/9/2023 2:31:00 AM
No ocean cruising for me either! Much prefer lakes and rivers. Great rhyme and flow, really enjoyed this poem :)
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Date: 4/8/2023 8:06:00 PM
Ilene this is a truly delightful poem which rhymes so beautifully. I love the ocean, rivers all waterways etc….but the big vast ocean can be quite scary at times l agree! Debx
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Date: 4/8/2023 4:52:00 PM
Me too Ilene, always happy to be on Terra Firmer again. Lovely poem. I agree about the scenes too. Best wishes
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Date: 4/8/2023 2:49:00 PM
That’s just the way I feel ilene. Hate the water all around and below and no land in sight. You caught my thoughts spot on.
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