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Wall's Discovery

personification Wall was so very pleased when she saw the new can of paint. "Cherry Tomato", wow! after ten years of "Calmly Quaint." The tickle of the brush filling her hard-to-reach places; she basked in the massage of the roller's sweet embraces. "What a thrill - dis-cover-y!" Slam-bang! excitement escapes. “You’ve covered up my new look with furniture, pictures and drapes.” written October 21, 2016 for contest The Wall by Anthony Slausen

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Date: 10/21/2016 12:10:00 PM
A terrific personification Scribe. As if she has a new outlook...good luck
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Date: 10/29/2016 8:39:00 PM
Thank you, Tim, for an encouraging remark.

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