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Walking On Forest Path

On a forest path almost dark I take a long walk The fallen dry leaves trampled to a sad music Flows through the tangled shadows trees make It seeps slowly into my senses getting weak I hear the requiem near the path’s end enigmatic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/14/2017 2:09:00 PM
I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..I especially like the use of a few words that we don't hear in our everyday conversations..Congrats on your placement..Sara
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Date: 8/14/2017 6:28:00 AM
Beautiful--congrats on your win!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2017 7:01:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 8/13/2017 1:15:00 PM
Such a passionate write. Fascinating! Congrats on the win! :) Sunita
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2017 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, Sunita, for appreciation.
Date: 8/12/2017 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/13/2017 1:11:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi, for appreciating.
Date: 7/27/2017 5:57:00 AM
Very nice piece Subimal!:) Be blessed!:)D.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/4/2017 12:14:00 AM
Thank you, Dorian, for appreciating.
Date: 7/27/2017 4:53:00 AM
Very well written :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/27/2017 10:51:00 PM
Hi, Heidi. Thank you. I follow your nice poems quite regularly.

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