Walk With Me Always - the Egg Timer Style

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~Walk With Me Always ~ ( Egg Timer ) Come with me Darling And hold my hand always walk With me Love Love With me Always walk And hold my hand Come with me Darling And hold me so tight Give me a kiss Two three four I want More More I want Two three four Give me a kiss And hold me so tight Come with me my love We'll dance love kiss Neath the moon All night Long Long All night Neath the moon We'll dance love kiss Come with me my love Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2017 April.21.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain ~ Author's Notes: The "Egg Timer" is a poetry form or style created by Erich J. Goller.

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Chris Green

Date: 4/21/2017 5:05:00 PM

This was beautiful and I love the style. I did not realize it was called the Egg Timer but it makes sense to me. Still, it is a poem filled with love and desire and those emotions shine brightly in your words.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/21/2017 6:53:00 PM

Hi Chris!:)Thank you ever so kindly, for stopping by once again and commenting so beautifully here on my love poem and for your very generous 7 too.So happy that you loved this one too Chris.I deeply appreciate it all my friend:)) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))D

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/21/2017 3:54:00 PM

Good Evening Dorian. This is lovely. It was so wonderful to see Erich Goller's format. You did marvelously as always. Your words and expression truly are of a healthy and right love. It shows and shines. Well done totally and completely. Enjoy the weekend.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/21/2017 6:54:00 PM

Hi Lisa!Thank you ever so kindly for stopping by and commenting so beautifully here on my love poem, and for your wonderful 7 too.So glad you liked this one Lisa.I deeply appreciated all :)) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D