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Waiting For Master

Eyes
Open
Snoopy lays
Down on the couch
At his own spot waiting for his master
For a snuggle with him and a cuddle
But master late
Snoopy tired
Sleepy
Eyes
Date: 11/07/2020 Submitted for: Double Tetractys 5 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper Visual # 1

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Date: 11/19/2020 12:56:00 AM
it's beautiful; excellent sharing
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/19/2020 2:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Mahtab for the visit and your comment. Much appreciated. Have a great day.. :)
Date: 11/18/2020 11:26:00 AM
Wonderful and made me smile. very well done hope you won.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/18/2020 6:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Peter for the visit and comment. Much appreciated. Am happy this made you smile. No, this didn't place, but it's ok. Contests are meant to be enjoyed and I just enjoy it, that's all. If reading my poem gives a smile in the reader's face, I value that MORE! Have a great day :)
Date: 11/14/2020 5:58:00 PM
Awe, made me smile and think about my Sky when I’m at work. This is very lovely :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/15/2020 1:41:00 AM
Happy that my poem made you smile thinking of your puppy Akkina. Sure she must be missing you when you are at work.. Thx dear for the lovely comment.. Hugs :)
Date: 11/10/2020 8:45:00 AM
A great piece, Anitha!! Good Luck in the contest!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/10/2020 11:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Newton Arach! Have a great day..:)
Date: 11/7/2020 6:46:00 PM
Your poem (and puppy) are so cute that I could pinch its cheeks! Lovely penned, Ani. G.L. in Eve's contest. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/8/2020 2:18:00 AM
Haha... Thank you Gershon for the visit and comment. Yes, puppies are always cute. Best regards. Have a great day.. :)
Date: 11/7/2020 3:50:00 PM
oh I REALLY like how YOU did this one. Not as sad as mine, that is for sure!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/8/2020 2:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea. Yours is the best and so sweet of you to reach out to everyone and comment. Love and hugs.. :)
Date: 11/7/2020 11:35:00 AM
Nice one Anitha, good penning!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/8/2020 2:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Gordon :)
Date: 11/7/2020 9:58:00 AM
So nice. I admire. Sure to win. Blessing.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/8/2020 2:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Maam for the comment and your blessing.. Love and hugs :)
Date: 11/7/2020 9:08:00 AM
Very sweet.. you did this very well..
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/8/2020 2:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Silent One. Have a great day :)