Waiting

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I have written another poem regarding the outcome of what lies beyond death. 

I feel I must refer you to it as an afterthought to the final line of this poem.

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Waiting

Those who share this earthly habitat of beauty-
flowers, sea creatures, beasts and men, 
all share  a strange, unwilling  predilection
with no other choice but to quietly acquiesce.   

Passive consent to this feared and austere fate-
no other means to feign a better scene,
contrary to what legend may surmise
nascent, as  it seems in all its innuendo
it nettles us to know that  death is certain 
a  ruthless, silent predator in  waiting.


For Craig's:  Becca's Inspiration "Waiting" - Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/10/2016 2:02:00 PM
A somber and sobering write, depicting the fate of all life on earth. Love your creative and evocative use of language here --- never heard of death being described as "innuendo" before ... that's a first. Best of luck on the competition, my fellow poet friend!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/12/2016 9:00:00 PM
Thanks Tim: It is rather a somber piece. I appreciate your kind comments. SuZ
Date: 1/31/2016 11:48:00 PM
Excellent write, Suzanne. Expiration date is certain. Best of luck in the contest. T.J
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Date: 1/31/2016 10:34:00 AM
There will come a time when we have to bid goodbye to all earthly wealth and beauty; death waits with stopwatch in hand, ready to press the button! ~ Regards // paul
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/31/2016 12:58:00 PM
So true, Paul: The years fly by so quickly that we often forget we are stamped with an expiration date like all organic things. Loving life, SuZ
Date: 1/30/2016 1:05:00 PM
It does nettle us Suzanne, great job, Cheers, Craig
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Date: 1/30/2016 3:21:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Craig: SuZ
Date: 1/27/2016 4:38:00 AM
Nothing like a few cheery thoughts to start the day...........but I guess that was the intention. Well written and good luck. Best, Dennis
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Date: 1/30/2016 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Dennis, We have to follow our thoughts sometimes. LOL. SuZ