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Wait For Me

If you were mine I would treat you forever kind ill hold you tight in my arms If you were mine would you smile at me would you cry my loneliness would be filled inside If you were mine would you come with me understand. to a far distance from land If you were mine would you dance with me straight in line or would you leave me there standing crying If you were mine would you listen or waste my time we could climb this endless wall to make it right If you were mine would you take from me my words of crime or would stay there and tell me the ruthless lies You're not mine you'll never be but in my mind i will wait for you will you wait for me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/15/2010 3:46:00 AM
Nicely penned and so emotional, Elton! Keep you imaginative pen flowing!...Gert
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Date: 10/31/2010 9:41:00 AM
An emotional write with a question and that little hope in the end. Enjoyed this Elton ;)
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Date: 10/30/2010 12:58:00 PM
A sweet, sad and emotional write.
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Date: 10/30/2010 8:59:00 AM
Hi Elton. I have played and sang for 47yrs, The last 15 with my son. Now its time to fade into the background (Not Disappear) so feeling a little lost. Hence this song. Loved this emotive piece. All the 'Ifs' finalised by the promise to wait. Beautiful but somehow sad. Thanks for your comments, Eamon
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Date: 10/21/2010 12:31:00 AM
Really touching. Nice poem Elton. Best wishes, Taha
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Date: 10/20/2010 3:23:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!
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