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Voyage From the Birth Canal To Cimetiere Du Pere-Lachaise De Paris Where I Lie

Birth Crawl Tears Steps Laughter Smiles Fears Careers Diseases Betrayals Denials Full circle Death nears Tears Laughter Frowns Dead clowns Dead In ground No sound Silence Abounds

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James Swartz

Date: 11/13/2017 10:22:00 PM

Arthur this is an amazing poem. This is brilliant and wonderful. I want to be buried there but all great writers do.

Sara Ella

Date: 11/2/2017 9:42:00 PM

Each word a step in life - well done Art :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/2/2017 9:07:00 PM

Loved the voyage Arthur, well done...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/2/2017 1:33:00 PM

That is a very unusual, creative poem, Arthur. I enjoyed it.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/2/2017 10:14:00 AM

on the stone "Here lies Art, a lover of life, a giver of hope, a true humanitarian, through the dark he was our light"

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/2/2017 5:05:00 AM

Yes, the circle of life so eloquently portrayed my friend, I'm in awe of the splendor of your write! I like how you wrote this with just a couple of syllables per line, that is a challenge, but so effective when done expertly as you have done here! I surely loved reading your illustrious piece here this morning, such a grandiose write, Great Work!!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/2/2017 2:08:00 AM

The circle of life in so few words Arthur. I love the peace of a graveyard Arthur but I am being scattered to the winds at a place we love ...https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/spectacular_sunset_on_our_final_resting_place_952095 :-) hugs jan xx